What makes a message persuasive?


Hi Reader,
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I was reviewing outbound SDR messages for a founder recently.

And I couldn’t help noticing the pattern.

It sounded scripted.
And engineered.
And over-personalized.
Even over-keyworded.
Click-baitish.
Bordering on manipulative.

That's the problem with most B2B SaaS sales and marketing.

It sounds too much like marketing and sales speak.

And because of that, it fails to persuade.

If you want your sales and marketing messages to work, let authenticity and humaneness be your central strategy.

Silky Agarwal

A newsletter for B2B SaaS founders and marketers who don't want the curse of knowledge to mess with their messaging.

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